Thriller The New World: 1st independent nation in the world (Thriller+ Fantasy)
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Assassin1997
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12-15-2017, 11:01 PM -
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Hello gossipians it's my first story on Gp. Also I'm not any professional writer so you can expect many grammatical mistakes from me . Suggestions are welcomed, be my mentor and Gide me.

Note : This story is fantasty + thriller story which is based on many historical incidents so always remember it's just my mind creation.
This post was last modified: 12-15-2017, 11:04 PM by Assassin1997.
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Assassin1997
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12-15-2017, 11:08 PM -
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Res 1
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Assassin1997
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12-15-2017, 11:08 PM -
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12-15-2017, 11:17 PM -
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This story is based on piracy and new world (N.america & S.america) , so the time will be 18th century and readers may not understand some concepts of 18th century hence I'll clear this old words meaning at end of each update.
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12-16-2017, 01:16 AM -
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Congrats for new thread bhai
Assassin1997
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12-16-2017, 08:09 AM -
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(12-16-2017, 01:16 AM)Night_Rider Wrote: Congrats for new thread bhai

Thanks sir
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12-16-2017, 08:24 AM -
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Congrats for new thread bhidu keep rocking..
Awesome start
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12-16-2017, 08:24 AM -
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