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Agla update bas hazir h
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Update 2


phir Naina apni aankhien kholti hai aur 1 pyari si muskaan k sath bas jejus ko dekhe jaa rahi hai

Ab aage

Naina:- bhagwaan ji thankyou humesha mere sath rehne ke liye...aur ha aaj mera result hai aur mujhe pata hai ki main achhe number se pass ho jaungi... isliye aaj bhi main kuchh nahi magungi apne liyeee... bachapan se lekar aaj tak jab bhi maanga , jo kuchh bhi manga sirf unhi k liye to manga hai...aapne mujhey sab kuchh diya hai itne achhe mumma papa,komal di aur charu jaisi behne aur abhinav jaisa dost , bus in sab ko khus rakhna aur unhe bhi... jab hum is duniyan me aate hai to aap humein humare sabhi rishto se pehchann karate hai hum sab ko jaante hai par bas 1 wo chehra hi humse chhipa kar rakhte hai...jo baad me humari zindagi ban jata hai humari zindagi ka sabse bada rishta jud jata hai jiske sath...jiski har saans se humari saanson ka rishta hota hai...(chehre par ek cute smile) par sayad is maamle me bhi main aage nikli aap se aur sab se...jo chehra aap humien 1 umra k baad pata chalne dete ho, wo chehra to bachpan me hi maine pehchaan liya tha...wo chehra to mere dil aur dimaag me basa hua hai... jab se pyar ko jana hai, pyar ko samjha hai, sirf unhi se pyar kiya hai...9 saal ki umra se sirf unhi ka chehra hai meri in aankhon me ( phir thoda hans kar ) ha bachhe ka par kya karu in 12 saalo me unhe 1 bhi baar nahi dekhka ki wo kaise lagte hai...aur in 12 salon me mera pyar unke liye sirf badha hai, kam nahi hua...bas aaj bhi apne liye kuchh nahi magungi bas unhe khush rakhna unki har muraad puri karna... mujhe to yeh bhi nahi pata ki wo mere baare me kya sochte hai... par meri to har saans me wo base hai... komal di kehti hai ki main pagal hu, par aap to jaante ho na ki kis hadd tak chahti hu main unhe... aur kal... kal to unka janam din bhi hai kal to wo pure 25 saal k ho jayenge...unhe jo chahiye unhe de dena...kal to meri zindagi ke har saal ka sabse bada din hai... unka janam din mere liye har 1 tyohaar se bada hai... aur agar aapko mujhey kuchh dena hai na, to mujhey mera pyaar de dena... mujhey mere aditya de dena... ( tabhi wahan father aate hai )

Father:- Naina ... my child.(Naina chehre par smile liye mudti h )

kashish:- good morning father.

Father :- Naina 1 baat punchu beta... (naina sir hilati h )tum yahan kai saalon se aati ho , aur jab bhi god se pray karti ho... to sirf aur sirf apne Aditya ke liye hi maangti aayi ho, kabhi apne liye kuchh nahi maanga tumne... bahut pyar karti ho Naina se...(Naina muskurati h ) use kabhi bataya ? bahut kismat wala hai Aditya ki tum jaisi ladki use itana pyar karti hai...

Kashish( with smile & tears ):- nahin father... unhe nahin pata ki main unhe pyar karti hu, aur jaante hai father 12 saal ho gaye mai ne unhe nahi dekha, ki wo kaise dikhte hai... wo bhi mujhey chahte hai ya nahin, mujhey nahin pata...par ha main unhe bahut cahati hu bachpan se hi, aur haan kismat waale wo nahin balki , kismat wali to main hun,...aap nahi jaante father ki wo kitane achhe hai...

Father ( smiles & wiping her tears ):- mujhey yakeen hai ki tumhara Aditya is duniyaan ka sabse achha insaan hoga kyuki use meri Naina ne jo pasand kiya hai...

Naina( smiles ):- thanx father, & father kal na mere Naina ka 25 birthday hai , unke liye pray jarur kariyega...( father smiles ) wo kya hai na aapka aur god ka direct connection hai to to aapki baat  jarur maanenge ...ok father ab main chalti hu college jana hai aaj mera semester ka result hai...

Father( uske sar par hath rakhte h aur wo muskura deti h ) :- ok my child god bless u & mujhey pura yakeen hai ki tumhe 1 din tumhara pyar jarur milegaa...

Naina( with wide smile & twinkles in her eyes ):- thankyou sooo muchhh father i love u ... byeee ( aur Naina wahan se college ke liye nikal jaati hai )


Mumbai at Agarwal office...

Aditya apne cabin m kaam kar raha tha tabhi koi cabin m aata h aur uska collar pakad leta h...

Aditya :- Tu yahan kya kar raha hai, aur yeh tere chehra...kya hua tujhe kunal... ? (Aditya has raha tha)

Kunal- abe saale , kal rat mujhe wahan marne k liye chhod k aaya tha na,...tu mera dost ho nahi sakta (Aditya uski condition par has raha tha) has... aur has saale tu mera sabse bada dushman hai, dekh meri halat dekh us kameene club k baunser maar - maar k  mera yeh haal kar diya hai...

Aditya - ( bade pyar se uske chehre ko chhuta hai )are re re re, mere laal, nahi nahi, mere neele , mere kale...bahut mara na ( angad make a puppy face & nods in yes & now sujal push him ) abe sale jab aisi harkat karega to marr hi padegi , wo teri aarti nahi utarenge... aur khabar daar jo mujhe aisi jagah dubara lekar gaya to...tujhey pata hai na ki mujhey ye disco , club , baar yeh sab nahi pasand...phir bhi jaan bhujh kar tune.

Kunal ( gusse se ):- kab tak Aditya, akhir kab tak tu aise hi jiyega ,,,,,, wo Aditya kahan chala gaya jo 2.5 saal pehle hua karta tha... jo humari group ki jaan tha jiske liye zindagi jeene ka naam tha , tu kehta hai ki tujhey ab disco nahi pasand ... tu... jiska 1 bhi din bina disco jaaye nahi gujarata tha...jo sirf masti karta tha... Aditya teri zindagi khatam nahi hui hai ...plzz apne sath aisa mat kar plzzz apne liye naa sahi apne pariwaar k liye...

Aditya (ankhon m ansun aur dard liye ):- unhi sab k liye to main jee raha hun kunal... warna yeh Aditya to usi din mar gaya tha , jis din iska Pyar isse cheen liya gaya , iska Pyar isse bahut door chala gaya...(ab kunal ko Aditya k liye bura lag raha tha)

Kunal:-Aditya plzzz sambhal apne aap ko...

Aditya (ansun pochta hua ):-  i m fine kun... (mood change karne k liye) chal achha tera nautanki ka aaj ka qouta khatam ho gaya ho to thoda sa kaam kar le... ya main bhi baunsers ko bulwaun...

Kunal( hanth jod k ):- nahiiinnn... chal mere baap...

Aditya:- jeete raho putra  (dono haste h , aur apne kam me lag jate hai)


Shimla at Naina's college

Charu :- dii kahan thi aap kitana der kar diya aapne aane me chaliye aapka result dekhte hai...

Naina:- wo bas aise hi chal...

Naina aur charu, naina ka result dekhte hai , naina bahut achhe marks se paas hui hai aur usne pure college me top kiya hai, aur use ab india ke best designers k under kaam bhi sikhne ko milega...

Charu :- wowww, diii ... partyyy...waise di aapne aage ka kya socha hai.

Naina:- maine socha hai ki jaise hi meri yeh 3 months ki training khatam hogi, main apna 1 chhota sa butique kholungi , jisme unn logo k liye bhi designer kapde honge, jo jyada paise kharch nahi kar sakte hai, aur main na bridle specialist banungi...

Charu:- bridle hi kyun?

Naina:- kyuki , sadhi pyar ki akhiri manzil hoti hai , isliye... achha jaa tu apni class attend kar mujhe abhi se milne jana hai ...

Charu:- oh!! di , di ,di... yad aaya , wo papa ne kaha tha ki aap se keh du ki aap Aditya bhaiya ko gift bhej dena  (naina use shock hoke dekh rahi thi ) kya di bhul gayi kya ... aapko yaad nahi kal Aditya bhaiya ka birthday hai.

Naina:- thik hai bhej dungi... (tabhi charu ki 1 frnd aa jati hai aur charu usse baat karne me buzy hai )

Naina apne man m:- ab tujhey kya pata ki yeh din mere liye kya hai..., ye pure saal ka wo din hai jis din main sabse jyada khush hoti hu kyuki meri Aditya se jo baat hoti hai, wo bhi saal me sirf do baar 1 to unke birthday pe aur dusra mere , par pichhle 3 saalo se sujal ne mujhey mere birthday pe wish hi nahi kiya...khair koi nahi ... par maine gift to unhey pehley hi bhej diya hai , ab tak to unhe mil bhi chuka hoga  ...par is baar bhi family k naam se , apni taraf se kharida hai , par pata nahi wo kab de paungi...

Charu (naina k kandhe par hath rakhte hue) :- Di kahan kho gayi ?

Naina:- ahhh... kahin nahi ... ok chal byeee...main Aditya ko gifts bhejwa dungi... ( tabhi wahan 1 ladka ata hai )

Boy:- kis gift ki baat ho rahi hai,Naina jii, kahin aap mujhey kuchhh...

Naina:- TUM !!!!
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11-11-2017, 12:15 AM -
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Good work keep rocking
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(11-11-2017, 08:14 AM)AP_316 Wrote: Good work keep rocking

Thanksbhai
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Next update bas hazir h
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Update 3


Boy:- kis gift ki baat ho rahi hai, naina jii, kahin aap mujhey kuchhh...

Naina:- tum !!!

Ab aage

Charu:- hiii, abhi tum kab aaye ?

Abhi:- bas 1 mint pehle, aaj in madam ne (naina ki taraf dekhte hue )mujhse itne dino baad milne ka plan banaya tha, par main pichhley 1 ghante se coffee shop par inka wait kar raha tha , par inka kuchh pata hi nahi tha...

Naina ( holds her ears very cutely ):- sorry abhii... ab chale...

Abhi:- are par kis gift ki baat ho rahi thi ... kahin mujhey kuchhh, u know...

Naina :- shut up, tumhey aur gift wo bhala kyun dungi... (uska hath pakad ke) ab chalo yahan se...

Charu:-Aditya bhaiya k liye gift lena mat bhulna byeee (aur wo apni k liye bhag gyi )

Abhi:- byee charu ... le yeh to gayiii... Naina yeh Aditya kaun hai... kahin mera saut to nahin...

Naina:- Whattt... kya kaha tumne...

Abhi:- nahin- nahin ... kuchh nahin meri maa... chal ab (dono coffe shop k liye nikal jate h, aaj naina ki treat thi bcz abhi ne pehle hi kaha tha ki naina hi is baar top karegi aur wahi hua )

Agarwal Office...

Kunal  ( boring expression ):- oye Aditya 10 bajne wale hai, ghar chal yaar tujhey kaam k shiwa kuchh nahi sujhta par mujhey aur bhi bahut se kaam hote hai, chal na kiran mera wait kar rahi hogi...

Aditya - bas kunal 5 minutes aur...

Kunal:- main pichhale 1 ghante se yahi sunn raha hun , tu thakta nahi hai yaar... jab dekho sirf kaam, kaam, kaam... achha khasa aman bhaiya ne kaha tha, ki main unke sath business join karu, par meri hi matt mari gayi thi ki tere sath merging k chakkar me phas gaya ...Aditya tu college me kya mast Item tha kitna Dhasu tha par ab 1 no. ka boring ho gaya hai... aur dekh tune mujhey kutta bana kar rakh diya hai...

Aditya - chup kar kuchhh bhi bolta hai... waise ab chal mujhey bahut bhukh bhi lagi hai... mere pet k sare chuhe kudd rahe hai...

Kunal:- aailaa... yeh to kamal hi ho gaya ... Aditya the best , workoholic ko bhukh bhi lagti hai ...

Aditya (sad expression k sath ):- ha ha ha... yeh joke tha...

Kunal:- tha to ?...

Aditya :- i dont like jokes...

Kunal :- i dont like u... ab chup kar aur chal... pehele mujhey mere ghar chhod phir apne ghar jaa

dono office se bahar aate hai aur car me baithte hai...

Aditya;- tu bhi mere ghar chal na ... aaj sath me mast sa diner kareinge

Kunal:- nahi yaar kiran mera wait kar rahi hogi... aur aman bhaiya bhi delhi me hai ( Aditya pehle Kunal ko uske ghar drop karta hai then wo apne ghar chala jata hai )

Agarwal House...

Aarti to Anurag:- dekha aapne apne ladle ko, rat ke 11 bajne ko aaye hai, par zanaab ka kuchh pata nahi .

Anurag:-aarti, wo aa jayega ab wo bachha nahi hai, sayad Kunal k sath hoga... chalo hum chal k so jate hai, are tumne to abhi tak khana bhi nahi khaya, tum kha lo aur ha maine sabhi ko ghar me mana kar diya hai ki Aditya ko koi bhi party se pehle wish na kare ,kunal ko bhi mana kiya hai, uske liye surprise hoga...(aarti haa m sir hilati h )

Aarti :- aap ja kar so jaiye main aati hun... 

Anurag:-aur plzzz Aditya ko kuchhh galat mat kehna aaj... kal uska janam din hai ( anurag chala jata h )

Aarti sochti h:- hey bhagwaan mera jii itana ghabra kyun raha hai sabhi ghar aa gaye hai par Aditya abhi tak nahi aaya hai... hey bhagwaan mere bachhe ki raksha karna , pata nahi kahan reh gaya ( tabhi phone bajta hai aur aarti phone uthati hai, saamne wale ki baat sunkar bahut darr jati hai aur shocked ho jati hai, ki tabhi Aditya ghar k ander aata hai  , Aarti phone ka reciever nahi rakhti aur bahut gusee se)

Aarti:- kahan tha tu ab tak ha, time dekha hai tune (Aditya shocked ho jata h apni maa k is behaviour se kyoki wo bahut gusse me thi) tujhe kuchh hose hawas hai ki nahiin ki teri wajah se ghar k log kitane paresaan honge 

Aditya :- plzz mumma aap mere liye mat paresaan... ( Aditya. ko katte hue)

Aarti :- main tere liye kyun pareshaan hone lagi, tere papa paresaan the, bas tu apne baare me hi sochta hai, ghar walo ki jara si parwah nahi hai ...(Aditya ki aankhon me anshun aa jate hai par wo unhe behne nahi deta )
aur ha kal se tu 8 baje k pehle ghar aa jaya karega samjhaa...
 
Aditya :- ji mumma.

Aarti - chal ab khana khale...

Aditya- mujhey bhukh nahi hai mumma, ab aap ja kar aaram kijiye , good night ( aur Aditya bina khana khaye apne kamre me chala jata hai )

Raghu kaka:- memsaab Aditya baba ne to mana kar diya, par aap to khana kha lijiye ,aapne aaj dopahar me lunch bhi achhe se nahi kiya tha .

Aarti:- nahi ... mujhey bhi bhuk nahi hai...( aur Aarti phone ka reciver rakh kar apne room me chali jati hai.)

anurag bed par leta hota hai aur Aarti dressing table par baith kar apni chudiyaan utar rahi thi 

Aarti apne man m:- kitana kuchh keh diya maine use... wo bhukha tha , par usne jhuth bola , hey bhagwaan kaisi parikhsha le raha hai tu meri... 1 maa hokar bhi mujhey mere bachhe k sath aisa salook karna padta hai, jaise wo mera dushman ho... mera bachha aaj bhukha so jaayega, par main kuchh nahi kar sakti , agar khana bhijwati bhi hun to wo nahi khayega... mujhey pata hai...kal uska janam din hai , aur mujhey sabse pehel use wish karna chahiye , par wo bhi nahi kar sakti ... mujhse jayda badkismat maa to koi ho hi nahi sakti...( anurag Aarti ki taraf dekhta h jo khoyi hui thi )

Anurag:-Aarti.. (Aarti apne khayalo se bahar aati hai) kya hua , tum thik to ho ?

Aarti:- ji,... ji kuchh nahi 

anurag:- to chalo so jaao , kal party ka bahut kaam hai, GN...

Aarti:- JI...GN... ( aur Aarti bhi bed pe jaakar so jati hai)
 
Aditya apne kamre me pe apne bed par baitha hai... uski aankhon se aanshun beh rahe hai,,,,, 

Aditya (apne man m):- mere sath hi aisa kyun hota hai ki jin logon se main sabse jayda pyarr karta hun wahi log mujhey sabse jyada dard de jaate hai...pehle mujhse mera pyar alag ho gaya aur ab mumma bhi mujhsey aur dur hoti jaa rahi hai... aaj tak unhone kabhi bhi , mere ghar late aane pe pabandi nahi lagayii, maine jo chaha hai , mujhey mila ...mujhsey kisi baat pe , kabhi nahi roka...par ab to unhe mere late aane par bhi...thik hai mumma aap jaisa chahte ho waisa hi hoga ...main kal se ghar time se aa jaya karunga... agar isse aap khush ho to mere liye wahi bahut hai... 

tabhi Aditya ka cell bajta hai...wo ghadi dekhta hai,  par 12 bajne me abhi bhi 20 minute baaki the aur jab no. dekha to wo hairaan ho gaya kyuki phone pe PRIVATE no. flash ho raha tha,Aditya phone uthata hai aur , jo saamne wale ne kaha... wo sunn kar hairaan ho jata hai...kind of completely shocked ... aur phir gusse me aakar apna cell floor pe patak deta hai , jisse phone tut jata hai...Aditya k sath aisa pichhle kuchh dino se ho raha hai, ki private no se use call aate hai...
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11-14-2017, 10:09 PM -
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Bhut hi bdhiya update bhai. . . Nicr going. . . . Ab kiska call aaya hai
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Good update bhai
Keep rocking
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